ithildin | Fresh Set Of Eyes

Would anyone be willing to be a fresh set of eyes for the fic I'm currently working on? I'm not looking for anything as involved as a beta reader, just someone who could do a read through and see if it's working so far. I only post complete stories, no WIPs, so way into a long piece of fic, sometimes you can't see the forest for the trees!

A bit about the story itself: it's a Highlander(Methos)/Grey's Anatomy cross obstensibly, but the Grey's aspect is more of a framework as a place with a hospital and doctors :) so you needn't have even seen the show AFAIC.

If you'd be interested, let me know!

Thanks!