ithildin: (Iron Man - Tony B&W)
ithildin ([personal profile] ithildin) wrote2008-06-06 10:42 am
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Eyeball Request

Okay, so I have about 2300 hundred words on part two of 'Practical Applications' done. I'm at a scene break. I have been tweaking and fiddling with it for two days, and I've made Nin look at it so many times, she needs new eyeballs too [g] Anyone who is familiar with Iron Man/Tony Stark be willing to just give it a quick read through and to see if Tony's voice sounds right and if the story more or less holds together? Otherwise, I'll keep tinkering and tweaking to no good effect and never get this story finished.
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[identity profile] kensieg.livejournal.com 2008-06-06 05:54 pm (UTC)(link)
pick me! pick me!I'll send it back asap after a quick eyeball.
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[identity profile] ithildyn.livejournal.com 2008-06-06 05:56 pm (UTC)(link)
ROTFL! Okay, I pick you :)

[identity profile] kensieg.livejournal.com 2008-06-06 05:58 pm (UTC)(link)
you remember my email address? I treated you a dabble of me 30 years ago.
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[identity profile] ithildyn.livejournal.com 2008-06-06 05:59 pm (UTC)(link)
What was 30 years ago?

Actually, I posted it to a filtered post that only you and Dejla can see: http://ithildyn.livejournal.com/649098.html

:)

[identity profile] kensieg.livejournal.com 2008-06-06 06:08 pm (UTC)(link)
30 years ago I was 16. I was clueless and an absolute dork.

I'm reading it now. Actually I printed it out and reading it with a pen in hand.

Comments to follow soon.
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