Poor Robert

[ithildin]

I realized that Montoya is hogging the story. Dr. Helm doesn't even get an appearance till 1500 odd words in! Poor guy.

Comments

[pat-t.livejournal.com]

What's wrong with you, dear? Dr. Helm is one handsome sexy guy. Get him into the story!

[ithildyn.livejournal.com]

He's in the story now, just not in the first part. I just found it amusing that my Montoya muse took over so thoroughly :)

[det-munch.livejournal.com]

Montoya could have some sort of accident early on.

[ithildyn.livejournal.com]

Nooo! No permanent harm can come to my favourite colonel [g]

[det-munch.livejournal.com]

I didn't say it had to be permanent!

[ithildyn.livejournal.com]

In this case, not even temporary is allowed. He's needed in the story. He has things to do, places to go, innocent people to incarcerate!

[rodlox.livejournal.com]

"innocent"? are you suggesting Senor Montoya may have ulterior motives behind his arresting people?

(kidding)

[ithildyn.livejournal.com]

Never! [g]

[rodlox.livejournal.com]

now Grisham on the other hand...
;D