ithildin | So, Queen of Swords?

Anyone interested in being a beta/continuity/sounding board for future QoS fic, should what I'm writing finally get to potential posting status? Mostly what I need is for a second set of eyes, someone that can tell me if it makes sense continuity wise, or notice something I may have forgotten to add. Especially this current fic, as it's a murder mystery, something I've never written. What I've posted so far has just been setup, but future parts will be a different story - no pun intended.