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I reread what I wrote yesterday and ended up doing major tweaking. I'm now done and won't reopen it till ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
strangevisitor7 sends it back or I'll start at it again!
A few things occurred to me as I was writing. One, Kronos and keeping the story's rating where it's at. I made a decision going in that there were places I didn't want to go, and I managed it. I'm glad I was able to pull it off - hopefully, successfully. Two, Ezra having the last word. How ironic is that? When I started writing this, I didn't even know who Ezra was, had never seen an episode of Magnificent Seven, and yet, he ended up being pivotal to the story. He really is a good conman, isn't he? Three, Joe sneaking in. I even said in an early comment reply when asked, that no, I had no plans for Joe to appear in this story. Boy, shows what I know! Maybe he colluded with Ezra? Five, I had to make some timeline changes part way through, and I think I fixed all the places that had events that needed redating, both in West and prior stories, but if I missed any, please let me know.
strangevisitor7 sends it back or I'll start at it again!A few things occurred to me as I was writing. One, Kronos and keeping the story's rating where it's at. I made a decision going in that there were places I didn't want to go, and I managed it. I'm glad I was able to pull it off - hopefully, successfully. Two, Ezra having the last word. How ironic is that? When I started writing this, I didn't even know who Ezra was, had never seen an episode of Magnificent Seven, and yet, he ended up being pivotal to the story. He really is a good conman, isn't he? Three, Joe sneaking in. I even said in an early comment reply when asked, that no, I had no plans for Joe to appear in this story. Boy, shows what I know! Maybe he colluded with Ezra? Five, I had to make some timeline changes part way through, and I think I fixed all the places that had events that needed redating, both in West and prior stories, but if I missed any, please let me know.
