I Hate That

[ithildin]

When you reread something you wrote, for the umpteenth time, and realize you had a momentary POV shift and never noticed [sigh] Will need to rewrite that paragraph.

Comments

[elycia.livejournal.com]

Yep, hate it when that happens--ESPECIALLY when I don't spot it until after it's posted... :P Good luck with the fix!

[ithildyn.livejournal.com]

Yep, this was posted. Was rereading in preparation for starting the sequel, and it leapt out at me!

[strangevisitor7.livejournal.com]

UGH! Yes I've had that happen. Sometimes it's just so hard to tell!

BTW I finally got an Ironman icon and I blame you. (love yours) So I beg politely - More fic please.XD

[ithildyn.livejournal.com]

He's very pretty :)

[layla-aaron.livejournal.com]

Ugh, that's a royal pain in the arse.

[ithildyn.livejournal.com]

Yep :)

[layla-aaron.livejournal.com]

It's really bad when you realize the whole scene flip flops. =(

[dejla.livejournal.com]

Oh, I'm with you there. I read something I've written, and all at once it screams at you -- POV shift, you dork!

And you just bang your head against the wall a few times until you feel better.

[ithildyn.livejournal.com]

It's this bit from part one of Practical Applications:

“Good,” he whispered before kissing her again, this time making it count. She melted against him, returning his kiss with an intensity that made him want to take back his promise to leave for the rest of the day.

The scene was form Charlotte's POV, and I did the kiss from his. Bad me!

[dejla.livejournal.com]

Well, if it makes you feel any better, I never even noticed it.

[ithildyn.livejournal.com]

Good! I haven't fixed it yet either.