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[ithildin]

If you write fic, original or fanfic, share a favourite passage, scene, or bit of dialogue that you've written. It doesn't necessarily have to be from what might be your favourite story over all, just something you've written that stands out for you as something you thought really came out well, that made you laugh, made you cry, or that you just damn well like! (any genre or type) (slash/het/gen/or something in between) A bit about why you like it would be nice to, though not a requirement. And a link to the story would be lovely:) Yeah, I'm demanding!

You have your assignment! Now go!

(yes, I'll share mine at some point) (but I'm more interested in what you all come up with)

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[sharpiesgal.livejournal.com]

You are a pushy broad....lol

And I'm the Queen of Brevity so you get this...

He caresses me with his fingertips.

He thinks that maybe I'm the solution to all his problems.

I know I'm not.

All I know is that I may be in pieces on this cloth yet I am more whole than he is right now.

This comes from Love Isn't Easy. A story I wrote about Horatio Caine using a unique POV. When I finished it, this bit just leapt out at me as the most powerful bit of the story. It describes a man on the edge; contemplating his demise as if that would stop the pain he was feeling and knowing ultimately it wouldn't.

The whole deal can be found here:

http://www.whispersofthemuse.org/Other%20FanFic/OtherLoveIsntEasy.htm

[captnofmyheart.livejournal.com]

Chris, I think that story is your best ever. I like stories from a POV that is unexpected. Those tend to be the most revealing. I loved it!

[ithildyn.livejournal.com]

Yes, I am :)That was very nice BTW.