A More Permanent Hell

I'm starting a reread of White As Snow, now I've finished it. My usual practice after finishing a long story to see if anything leaps out at me that needs a fixin'. I'm in friggin part one, and then it hits me.

( Spoilers for the story ahead and some very off the wall thoughts... )

I'm starting a reread of White As Snow, now I've finished it. My usual practice after finishing a long story to see if anything leaps out at me that needs a fixin'. I'm in friggin part one, and then it hits me.

( Spoilers for the story ahead and some very off the wall thoughts... )